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Submitted: August 24, 2006
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Here is the final version of this drawing (I put the other one in scraps)

I used my new pens to draw the lineart and coloured in pencil (I hope it seems a bit neater!!)
Anyway, I hope you like her ^^

And I hate my scanner because the drawing in real looks far better than pixels.. -__- sorry guys... T__T

Lust from FullMetal Alchemist by Hiromu Arakawa
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~megounette:iconmegounette: Aug 24, 2006, 2:47:09 PM
ha ouais ça rend super bien ! bravo !! ^3^

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~oni18:icononi18: Aug 24, 2006, 3:06:59 PM
merciii c'est mieux que l'autre tu ne trouves pas??

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~Patineitor:iconPatineitor: Aug 24, 2006, 3:13:17 PM
wow, love this version

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~oni18:icononi18: Aug 24, 2006, 3:29:08 PM
thanks ^^ :hug:
I really think it is better than the other one, don't you think?

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~Patineitor:iconPatineitor: Aug 24, 2006, 6:40:21 PM
Yes, I like this one better ^__^

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=Vixen-sama:iconVixen-sama: Aug 24, 2006, 6:57:28 PM Mood: Optimism
pas mal du tout ! pour le lineart je suggererais juste d'essayer d'avoir des lignes plus continues, fluides, rapides, c'est un peu tremblant par endroits mais c'est déjà pas mal du tout ! et pour le shading, je suggererais de tramer et ensuite s'il le faut estomper pour avoir quelque chose de lisse X) après tu peux revenir travailler dessus à la gomme pour les reflets ou effacer les débordements X)

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~Maha-miau:iconMaha-miau: Aug 25, 2006, 1:19:30 AM
amazing work!!!! ^O^

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~megounette:iconmegounette: Aug 25, 2006, 2:07:07 AM
ouaip ça fait pas le meme effet ^^

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~oni18:icononi18: Aug 25, 2006, 2:26:11 AM
thaaaaaaaanks ^0^

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~oni18:icononi18: Aug 25, 2006, 2:32:03 AM
ok.. mais le problème, c'est que ça fait déjà lisse sur le papier XD je vois pas quoi faire de plus.. mais tu a raison pour le lineart.. j'ai un peu tremblé.. (beuuuu je deviens vieille loooool)
merci beaucoup d'avoir commenté :hug:

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